Snyder Critiques

Snyder February 17, 2020

Everyone	Rehearse your lines.  Hit all consonants and each word must be separate Cut camera Gestures should pull your body Speak to the audience Then our
Alee & Eli	Keep snake and alligator
Music	Did not hear music before second mechanicals Music was too loud underscoring Kate’s Oh Spite line
Ramzi	Some actor must present wall Bottom has to think about the words
Drums	When Demetrius falls asleep last time.
Clay	Look at whomever is speaking.  You MUST have expression on your face.
Breck	Good job on other side of cobwebs, watching
Colin	New Orleans Tuck shirt in.  NO ONE IN THE 20s would have left shirt untucked.  Someone tuck it in for him Don’t growl as fairy king – two people have told you that DICTION
Mechanicals	BE BIGGER  Watch silent movies.  There is not enough contrast between rehearsal and the play
Alee & Colin	Nuptials draw near - profile
Ramzi & Tre Colin	Diction separate words
Flute	Handkerchief to cry into
Eli	AFTER Colin and Alee’s dialogue, wink, fairies hand you hats.  Don’t know if you can hold the hat in your hand.  You have to get the envelope Need drums there with changing of hat and pulling up pants Can you sing LAST line of song after your last monologue